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- From: Crawford_Kilian@mindlink.bc.ca (Crawford Kilian)
- Subject: Re: Grammar
- Organization: MIND LINK! - British Columbia, Canada
- Date: Mon, 21 Dec 1992 17:25:47 GMT
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- Not so fast, Wilson! Didn't you see the sign--"Lurkers in Cyberspace Will Be
- Shot," which I corrected out of the passive to "We Shoot Cyberspace Lurkers"?
-
- I sympathize with your feelings about the schools' dubious encouragement of
- writing skills, and no doubt various people will suggest we take our
- discussion elsewhere to misc.education or alt.parental.frustration. Still, a
- newsgroup devoted to writing ought to have the bandwidth (God, I write the
- jargon like a native!) to tolerate a parochial discussion with galactic
- implications.
-
- Yup, sentence diagramming is as lost an art as cuneiform; I can't even do it
- myself very well anymore, and my students get that hunted look when I try.
- Many of them do realize they're dreadfully weak in the grammar of their own
- language's standard dialect. I don't think, however, that the schools are
- entirely to blame. In some areas I find my own grade 12 daughter writing
- exceedingly well, albeit with too much emphasis on formula: thesis, 3
- paragraphs of proof, restatement of thesis. She also has a literary
- vocabulary quite beyond what I possessed at her age (okay, when I was her age
- written language had yet to be invented, but hey--we had a great oral
- tradition of tales of mammoth hunts).
-
- What we don't always recognize is that for every baby boomer who mastered
- parts of speech in 1957, three left school before they got the chance. School
- 30 years ago was a conscious winnowing of the academic wheat from the
- semiliterate chaff. Since then we've changed the emphasis in the schools
- altogether--so that now we want (in theory) to hang on to everyone and
- graduate everyone with a solid grounding in academic subjects. This is an
- admirable and necessary goal, but we're still locked into a system that
- doesn't know much beyond winnowing. Old habits, like old teachers, die hard.
-
- I could go on about this, but enough for now. Over to you, Peter--and anyone
- else with a view on the subject.
-
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