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- J U S T I C E
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- by Daniel Robinson
- Kansas City MO
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- The Second Place Winner in
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- LOADSTAR's PROSEQUEST '97 Contest
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- The Hill
-
- The crowd watched nearly silent
- as the two figures walked up the hill
- to the small wall of loose limestone
- rocks. Few ever crossed this boundary
- that encircled the hill. Some passed
- quickly through when it became the
- shortest route home in bad weather,
- but others never entered, preferring
- to walk around in the worse spring
- squalls rather than cross through it.
- Only the caretaker frequented the
- hill beyond the stones. Quietly and
- dutifully he had spent his life
- caring for this ground, removing the
- weeds, cutting the grass, keeping the
- small shelter near the top repaired
- and seeing that the post remained
- ready should it be needed. Now, after
- 30 years of tending this hill he too
- hesitated as he reached the wall,
- hesitated a moment, then grasping his
- charge by the upper arm moved on past
- the wall, up the hill, past the
- shelter and beside the post. The
- hands of his companion, already
- bound, were now lashed to the ring in
- the post, the post and ring he had
- oiled all these years so that even
- now it looked no different than the
- day he had first walked to it. Today
- however it was different. Today it
- was no longer a black iron ring in a
- smooth hedge post on the top of a
- well tended hill. Today until sunset,
- it was a prison.
-
- Walking the few feet to the
- shelter the caretaker sat down upon
- the bench within. Looking down the
- path to the town he saw the people
- below were settling down too, finding
- themselves a place to sit, or lie or
- lean. A few left to tend to chores,
- but no one would go far. No one would
- want to be too far to return before
- sunset. No one would want to be so
- far that they could not return to a
- vantage point should there be a shift
- in the wind, a noise from the woods,
- a change in weather.
-
- The caretaker expected a silent
- vigil. His companion, however, looked
- to shorten his sentence, if not in
- time, then at least in endurance.
- "What do you really expect to happen
- now?" the prisoner asked.
-
- The caretaker remained staring at
- the the village below and answered,
- "I expect nothing. You will stand and
- I will sit and whatever happens,
- happens."
-
- "And if nothing happens?" the
- prisoner queried.
-
- The caretaker still looked down
- towards the town and replied, "Then
- nothing happens. That is the
- sentence. You have lived here all
- your life as have I. You know our law
- as well as I. Now if you don't mind I
- would prefer to wait in silence."
-
- A smile began to form on the
- prisoner's face, "Standing here is my
- sentence. I remember nothing said
- about silence," the prisoner reminded
- his keeper.
-
- "Silence may not be required of
- you, but I have no wish to talk. Talk
- all you like, scream if you wish, but
- don't expect me to keep you company,"
- the caretaker replied.
-
- His prisoner would not be
- ignored, "You want me to stand
- quietly here all day and just wait
- for some vermin to walk up and bite
- me, or some storm to rush in and
- drench me, or God knows what. Is a
- day of idle conversation too much for
- a condemned man to ask?"
-
- The caretaker turned his head
- slightly towards his prisoner and
- asked, "You feel your sentence too
- harsh?"
-
- His prisoner nearly laughed and
- replied, "Harsh? My God no! I'm found
- guilty of doing in three of the
- upstanding, hard working citizens of
- this town. Chopped up the first two
- and sent the pieces down the river
- for the turtles to gnaw on, they say.
- Would have kept it up too, had the
- McGregger boys not come into Fiske's
- stable as I was finishing him off.
- Why, the whole town might have
- disappeared before I was done. No
- sir, I would say standing out here in
- the summer breeze, smelling the
- clover and watching the occasional
- bird fly overhead, conversation or no
- conversation, is a damned easy
- sentence, all things considered."
-
- The caretaker now turned to face
- his prisoner. "You know, it's more
- than that."
-
- The prisoner still smiling
- continued, "Well, it may be more or
- it may be just that. Not you, or I,
- or any of the good people who would
- rather leave my fate to chance than
- dirty their own hands really knows
- whether it's a day in the park, a day
- of misery, or a day of death. In
- fact, except that I'm tied to this
- post, this day isn't any different
- than yesterday, or the day before."
-
- The caretaker's face had been
- nearly expressionless. Now it began
- to show the mixture of puzzlement and
- anger he was feeling. He turned back
- to stare out beyond the meadow then
- turned to examine his charge for some
- answer. Was he just pushing for a
- debate to entertain himself until
- sunset? No, clearly he believed this
- was nonsense. He was smiling, at
- times almost laughing. He was
- actually amused by the sentence, or
- his ability to annoy, or... Clearly
- the prisoner was pleased with
- himself. The thirty years the
- caretaker had worked in this place he
- had often imagined what it might be
- like should he have to perform this
- task, but not once had he imagined
- the prisoner would be unrepentant,
- even irreverent. Evil as the crime
- had been he hadn't expected this. Not
- from someone who knew of the past,
- who knew of the others.
-
- He remained facing his prisoner,
- looking him in the eyes he asked "You
- know what happened in the past? What
- happened to the others who have stood
- at that post?"
-
- The prisoner sneered, "Yes, yes
- we all know the children's tales. You
- don't really think to frighten me
- with such things now do you?"
-
- The caretaker returned, "We both
- know the tales people tell, but I
- also know more. As caretaker I have
- read the records back to the
- beginning. Whenever we ask how the
- sentence was first chosen we are
- simply told "by the wisdom of the
- elders". You want entertainment. I
- will tell you the whole story of how
- it all started and perhaps you will
- understand that this is not such a
- frivolous thing. If you do not want
- to hear this, then I will ask that
- you remain silent, and I will do the
- same."
-
- Entertainment was indeed what the
- prisoner wanted, "Very well, old man,
- tell me the history of this
- sentence". His smirk got wider for a
- moment as he added, "As God is our
- witness, tell me how it all began".
-
- The caretaker ignored the mockery
- and began:
-
-
- The Decision
-
- Such a crime had not occurred
- since they first came here. This is
- why they had built a town so far from
- the cities and away from the trade
- routes. They had hoped to escape the
- evil of such places, but what had not
- come with them, followed behind.
- Still, theft or vandalism could be
- repaid when the person was caught,
- repaid double, that was "their" law.
- However this crime could not be
- compensated with hard work or
- repayment. A life had been taken. It
- was decided that how to punish the
- crime would fall to the elders. How
- to punish murder had long been
- debated in the town but no decision
- was ever reached. Now, it could be
- put off no longer. Three were chosen
- to make the final choice. All others
- had sworn that their decision,
- whether they agreed or not, would be
- final. No further debate would be
- allowed. Each was chosen to represent
- one of the three factions that had
- emerged from earlier attempts to
- close the issue. These three would
- now have to make the final decision.
-
- One was Mr. Gants, the
- frontiersman who had chosen the
- town's location years before leading
- the first of his followers to this
- valley. He felt most betrayed by this
- crime. He had picked every family,
- every person who had come with the
- first group. To him, that the
- murderer had come from this group,
- was as much a shock as the crime
- itself. A mistake had been made and
- he intended to correct it. He could
- not, he would not allow this disease
- to spread. His fist pounded the table
- as he spoke, "A life for a life! We
- can not allow murderers to live among
- us. This man must die!"
-
- Another, the Reverend Randal
- spoke deliberately and sternly as if
- he were giving a Sunday gospel from
- the pulpit. "How can we condemn a man
- for what he has done if we see no
- harm in performing the task
- ourselves. We will not stop murder by
- becoming murderers ourselves."
-
- "That is quite different,"
- spouted Gants. "You know an act to
- punish a crime is not the same as
- committing the crime itself. You have
- spoken volumes of how God punishes
- sinners, often with death. Do you
- call God a sinner for this?"
-
- Angered by this blasphemy,
- Reverend Randal stood and shot back,
- "God sees all. He knows all. He
- cannot be fooled by lies or
- deception. He makes no mistakes. We
- may not doubt this man's guilt but
- what we decide now will be the
- punishment for all who are found
- guilty in the future. If we find out
- a month later that some person was
- innocent, can we bring them back from
- the dead? If we find we have killed
- an innocent, can we allow ourselves
- to go unpunished?"
-
- Gant, not to be undone by
- platitudes, snarled back, "If he
- breaks out of his chains and kills
- another, will God raise them back?"
-
- The third elder, Old Bellows, was
- weary, not just from years of life
- but from years of debate. Such
- irreverence from his fellow elders,
- those chosen as the wisest of the
- town, was trying his tolerance.
- "Gentlemen, that is enough!" The
- other two, startled by their
- companion's sudden entry into the
- discussion, stared towards him as the
- old man now raising slowly to his
- feet looked at each. Taking stock of
- their comments they both sat down and
- waited for the expected scolding from
- him. But in their argument the old
- man had seen more than blasphemy and
- anger. He had seen a solution. "Since
- we all agree the only one who can
- decide without error is God himself
- than let God decide this man's
- fate."
-
- The others stared in confusion.
-
- Bellows continued, "Tomorrow at
- dawn we will take him to the hill
- behind the church where God can see
- him, watch him, and if He so chooses,
- punish him. If by sunset God has
- chosen to ignore this man's crime,
- then we were wrong to convict him,
- and we too shall ignore it. Are we
- agreed?"
-
- "No!" shouted Gant." We know this
- man is guilty. There is no mistake.
- What if nothing happens?"
-
- Bellows threw his arms in the
- air, "Then nothing happens, and the
- reverend is correct. God does not
- want us to kill even as punishment
- for killing."
-
- Now the reverend challenged, "And
- if he dies from whatever act of God
- or nature should befall him, we are
- expected to kill those in the future
- who we believe to have committed such
- acts?"
-
- "Not at all", replied Bellows.
- "Whether he lives or dies, the
- punishment will remain as it was this
- time. To have God decide their
- punishment is the solution,
- gentlemen. What we do, as men, will
- only lead to more quarrelling among
- the townspeople once this is done.
- All may have signed in good faith to
- abide by our decision, but soon the
- losing sides will bring it up again.
- We tried to escape human nature once
- and it has brought us to this. This
- will not end with a decision giving
- victory to one or the other of us.
- Eventually, that decision will lead
- back where this began, a town
- divided, neighbors angry at each
- other, just as you two were a moment
- ago, but no one will question the
- will of God."
-
- The other two saw the wisdom of
- this, though each saw different
- advantages. The reverend knew he
- could not object to God as judge and
- executioner, and since no "man" would
- harm the murderer, his objections
- were satisfied. The frontiersman knew
- he could guarantee justice whatever
- outcome. If God chose to ignore this
- man he could meet with ill luck a few
- days later while hunting game or
- crossing a stream. Justice would
- prevail one way or the other. The
- decision was made, the details worked
- out, the town notified.
-
- The next day the prisoner was
- taken out and tied to a tree near the
- top of the hill behind the church.
- There was no caretaker then. He was
- tied to the tree with a thick rope,
- like a dog would have been. He was
- warned that if he tried to break
- loose a delegation would climb back
- to him and lash him tight to the
- tree. He had a bucket of water within
- reach and a little bread left for him
- should he become hungry. His hands
- were tied in front of him to allow
- him to eat and drink, but still slow
- any attempt to escape. To further
- guarantee he would not escape, his
- feet were hobbled.
-
- It would have been no surprise if
- a storm had come up and the prisoner
- died from a sudden bolt of lightning.
- In fact it was later that same year
- lightning killed that very tree. But
- nothing happened. The whole town had
- watched all afternoon from the church
- yard. He had eaten no bread, but they
- saw him get up and drink at times
- throughout the afternoon and then sit
- back down in the shade of the tree.
- He had never been out of sight. So,
- when the townspeople, by now
- dissatisfied with the sentence, went
- to cut him loose, they were surprised
- to find him sitting peacefully under
- the tree, quite dead. No mark was
- found on him and no reason for his
- death was ever found. Some believed
- he was poisoned, but most truly
- believed that it was the will of God.
- Whatever happened, the die was cast.
- The wisdom of this sentence was
- proven, and to this day all who were
- found guilty of murder had their
- death or deliverance upon this hill.
-
-
- Revelations
-
- The prisoner had sat dutifully
- and listened to the tale, the last
- part of which he had heard many times
- before with no significant
- alterations. Some would claim the man
- was seen choking on his food, or that
- a fog suddenly descended and when it
- lifted they saw the man was dead.
- Still, in all the versions the man
- was dead and no man had laid a hand
- on him. The sentence was a success
- and had worked just as well ever
- after. The prisoner seemed changed by
- the story, and the caretaker was
- feeling pleased with himself. There
- was no smirk on the prisoner's face
- now, and he said nothing. The
- caretaker wasn't sure what it meant,
- but for a long time he had the
- silence he wanted.
-
- The caretaker dipped a cup of
- water from the bucket near his bench.
- He drank and then dipped the cup
- again and went over to the prisoner
- and gave him a drink. He thought it a
- bit odd how the prisoner watched him,
- but neither of them spoke. He turned
- and went back to his bench and looked
- at the town. The crowd was beginning
- to return and looking off towards the
- west he saw why. A faint bank of
- clouds was visible. Far too thin to
- cause any real alarm, but still
- enough to bring back those who wanted
- to assure themselves of an
- unobstructed view should the threat
- increase.
-
- Then the prisoner finally spoke
- but now he no longer seemed amused.
- "You really believe that this will
- happen?"
-
- The caretaker, still confused by
- the change of character, simply
- answered, "Yes."
-
- The prisoner spoke as though
- genuinely interested. He was not
- smiling and betrayed no sarcasm as he
- continued, "You believe if someone is
- guilty of murder they can be brought
- to this hill and God will punish them
- appropriately?"
-
- "Yes I do," the caretaker
- emphasized.
-
- "And if they were misjudged, if
- they were innocent, then God would do
- nothing?"
-
- The caretaker was annoyed by the
- repetition and shot back, "Yes, I
- believe in the sentence, I believe it
- has always worked and I believe the
- elders were right when they
- originally chose it."
-
- The prisoner now watched the
- caretaker closely as he asked his
- next question, "Then how can you sit
- here on the hill yourself? Sit here
- on this same hill only a few feet
- away from me?"
-
- If the prisoner expected to
- startle his companion he was
- disappointed. The caretaker's gaze
- was once again out past the meadow
- towards the woods beyond. His face
- once again expressionless, he
- answered "The sentence is the
- sentence. What will happen will
- happen because it is just, it is
- right, it is God's will". After a
- pause he added, "And it will happen
- to whomever God wishes to punish."
-
- Another long silence followed.
- The caretaker had known that his
- prisoner was not guilty of all he had
- been accused. Throughout the trial he
- had kept a secret he thought only he
- could know. If it was to be solved it
- would have to be done before sunset.
- Guilty or innocent, punished or free,
- if he lived, this man would likely
- leave town quickly. This might be his
- only chance.
-
- The caretaker now turned towards
- the prisoner and asked, "Why all
- three?"
-
- The prisoner smiled coyly, "What
- do you mean?"
-
- "Why did you confess to all
- three?" the caretaker demanded.
-
- Now the prisoner's smile
- broadened, "You should remember I
- confessed to nothing. I was caught
- trying to kill Mr. Fiske. After I
- described in graphic detail how I
- killed and disposed of poor Mrs.
- Fiske the month before, everyone
- simply added the disappearance of
- Miss Adams to my sins. I guess I
- should say everyone except you."
-
- The caretaker looked towards the
- prisoner but betrayed no emotion as
- he said, "And yet you knew what had
- happened to her all along. You were
- nearby when it happened and saw me
- leave the area?" He looked into the
- prisoner's eyes and saw no answer.
- Now his voice betrayed some concern.
- "You were near by and heard us
- arguing and when it fell silent you
- advanced and saw the body?" He
- searched the prisoner's face still
- waiting for a reply, but only saw the
- smile. Finally, his voice betraying
- his confusion, he asked, "You were
- watching and heard and saw
- everything?"
-
- The prisoner stared into the
- caretaker's eyes, "Didn't you wonder
- why no one ever found the body?"
-
- Indeed, the caretaker had waited
- in fear for days afterward wondering
- when the discovery would happen.
- Searches were conducted for days
- after she was missed and many times
- in the area of the crime. Yet no
- alarm ever sounded. No evidence of
- Miss Adams was ever seen again. When
- he finally worked up the courage to
- return to the place he had left her,
- he could find no evidence that the
- clearing had been occupied by either
- the living or the dead. "You did a
- fine job of cleaning up," the
- caretaker commented.
-
- The prisoner gazed out beyond the
- meadow and recalled, "Yes, I thought
- it would make a good rehearsal. It
- was no easy task either. No blood of
- course, but lots of torn cloth, and
- you stepped on that hat of hers and
- crushed it. You can't imagine how
- many small pieces of that I found in
- the grass. But only one shoe. I never
- did find the other one. She must have
- kicked it a long way in the struggle.
- I knew they would recognize those
- Sunday shoes she was wearing, so I'd
- go back and look whenever the area
- was clear of searchers, but never did
- find it."
-
- The caretaker was not interested
- in the care his companion had taken
- to hide the crime. He now asked
- directly, "Where is the body?"
-
- His companion smiled, "Oh don't
- worry my friend, it's disposed of."
-
- "Where?" insisted the caretaker.
-
- The prisoner chuckled a bit,
- "She's with Mrs. Fiske of course, or
- perhaps I should say she's where Mrs.
- Fiske has joined her." The prisoner
- was clearly enjoying the look of
- revulsion on the caretaker's face. "I
- see you realize the story I told in
- court was true. Yes, I know many of
- the good townspeople thought I was
- lying to hide the fact that Mrs.
- Fiske and I were in this together.
- They imagined that Mr. Fiske was Miss
- Adams' secret lover and that after
- Mrs. Fiske and I had done in poor
- Miss Adams, she had slipped away.
- They suspected that, after
- eliminating her husband, I would join
- her in some far off city where..."
-
- The prisoner stopped in mid-
- sentence when the sunlight was
- suddenly blocked by an approaching
- cloud bank. The two had been so
- involved with their conversation that
- neither had noticed the darkening
- clouds that were now overhead. The
- caretaker looked to the bottom of the
- hill and saw everyone was once again
- gathered to watch. He felt the air
- chill as the breeze was broken by
- small gusts of wind, and he saw the
- mists advancing towards them that
- marked the edge of the approaching
- rain. But there was no thunder, nor
- flashes of lightning that might mark
- a quick end to the vigil. He thought
- how it would be fitting if his
- companion would catch his "death of
- cold" and slowly wheeze his way into
- oblivion. However, short of this, it
- seemed the prisoner would soon walk
- freely back to town. Even though the
- sun was no longer visible, he knew
- there was less than thirty minutes
- left before the timekeeper below
- would ring the church bell and signal
- the end of the sentence.
-
- The caretaker had little time to
- finish his inquires, "What of the
- clothing?" he asked. "You couldn't
- take the chance that some would be
- found downstream."
-
- "Well, there are advantages to
- being the blacksmith," the prisoner
- chuckled again and continued, "For
- instance, no one wonders why you have
- a fire burning on a warm summer
- day."
-
- The rain began suddenly and
- steadily but not yet hard enough to
- shroud them from the people below.
- The caretaker now moved further under
- cover and waited for the bell to
- sound. The rain would make it
- difficult to hear any answers now,
- and he no longer wished to continue
- entertaining his companion. It was
- clear the prisoner was enjoying every
- wince on his face. The guilt and
- grief he had once felt now returned.
- At least the rain would prevent his
- tormentor from seeing how successful
- he had been. By allowing the rain to
- reach him before he retreated, he
- disguised the tears that mingled with
- rainwater on his face.
-
- A short time later, the bell
- rang. The caretaker rose and went out
- to the post. Now the rain increased,
- and as he reached the post, he saw it
- was so intense, that he could no
- longer see the town. Even the stone
- wall was no longer visible. He took
- out his knife and began cutting the
- rope from his neighbor's hands.
-
-
- Discoveries
-
- The townspeople strained to see
- the two figures that had vanished in
- the rain and waited for them to
- emerge from the downpour. Then as
- suddenly as it had increased the rain
- slacked off and they saw the hill
- clearly again. But no figures were
- visible, no bodies lay on the ground.
- Two men walked up and examined the
- shelter and post and looked out past
- the meadow. The shelter was empty but
- for the drinking pail and cup still
- laying on the bench. On the ground by
- the post lay the ropes that had held
- the prisoner to the post and bound
- his hands, but no further evidence as
- to what had occurred was found. Any
- clues to what became of the two had
- been erased by the rain. A search of
- the surrounding woods and streams
- turned up nothing.
-
- They began to doubt the "wisdom
- of the elders." Most of the
- townspeople suspected the caretaker
- was murdered, and the killer somehow
- disposed of the body while making his
- escape. "How could an innocent man be
- dead and a guilty one escape? If it
- was truly God who punished those
- brought to the hill, then how could
- this have happened?" A few still
- believed so strongly in the sentence
- they decided that God had taken them
- both, though by what means and why
- they could not answer. The town did
- not have to wait long. By the next
- evening everyone was silent. No one
- was questioning the "wisdom of the
- elders." Whatever had happened, they
- were certain no innocent man had died
- on the hill. The neighbors had
- entered the caretaker's cottage that
- morning. In the main room, upon the
- dining table, sat a single shoe.
-
- The End
-
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