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- Collaborative story outline: 09.29.89 Draft:@END_FILE_ID.DIZ
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- General plot:
- Two men and two women meet during an island holiday trip. Each bought a
- "package" deal of "fun in the sun" at a Carribean resort. Sort of a "Club
- Med" thing. The men meet, sitting next to each other on the flight down.
- They were strangers, now they're "pals" for the long weekend, even though
- their personalities seem to be opposites.
- The ladies fly down together, both enjoying a "fling" together. They are
- friends, having known each other for about two years. They're dreaming of
- dining, dancing and having a "ball" with the "hunks" they're going to find
- down there (little do they know...)
-
- (before we get into more plot here... let's see who our "players" are.)
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- MAN #1 (Name: Nick Degage) *
- Early 40's, 6'3", sandy blonde hair neatly trimmed and just over the
- shoulders, blue eyes (stolen from Paul Neuman), 175 lbs, lean and fit. He's
- starting to show "crow's feet" around the eyes when he laughs. Clean shaven.
- He's a successful salesman for a beachwear and accessories company in Calif-
- ornia, reflecting the easy going, "Lets have fun" sort of attitude. (Now the
- real details): His chest hair is blonde and sparse, just enough to see. He
- has two small scars on his right knee (surf accident), a trim tush, and is
- 9" fully erect. Young and fit, he can come in bucketfulls with the right
- stimulation (a source of embarassment when he was younger). His favorite
- position is long session of '69'. Favorite act: Coming on her breasts while
- she rubs them against his balls.
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- MAN #2 (Name: ___________________) *
- Mid to late 30's. Short, neat dark brown hair, a few flecks of
- gray. Hazel eyes, broad shoulders. About 5'9" to 5'11", muscular although
- at 180-185 pounds, he could exercise more. He has a neat trim moustache.
- He is a pilot for a large Air-Cargo company, loves flying, scubadiving,
- boating, hiking, etc. He is smooth and gallant, "polished" comes to mind,
- with a dynamite smile (Omar Shariff or Tom Cruise take your pick). He is
- tough minded, practical, honest, and level headed. Origin: Western US.
- (Details: Think about Robert Conrad, just taller. He has dark hair on his
- chest, arms and legs, sparse on his stomach. Fully erect he is about 7" long
- but is thicker around than average. His favorite position is woman on top,
- or missionary. Favorite act: Coming on her pussy from behind.)
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- WOMAN #1: (Name: ________________)
- 28 - 32 years, 5'7" to 5'10", 123-128 pounds, long golden blonde hair,
- nicely tan but not over-dark, very pretty, with a somewhat wide & sexy mouth.
- Her smile lights up her face. Blue eyes. Her hair reaches the middle of her
- back (at least), and is feathered on the sides. She likes to dress in sexy
- clothes that show her lean, fit figure, and her long graceful legs. She
- works as an Asst. Marketing Director for a Hi-tech company in the east.
- (Details: 36c-22-35, she has a neatly trimmed blonde bush, her tan stops at
- her breasts and hips, revealing a fair complexion. She is bisexual, although
- she leans more towards men. Her favorite position: Her on top, facing his
- feet. Favorite act: having her pussy eaten for hours.)
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- WOMAN #2: (Name: ________________)
- 23-26 years, 5'3" to 5'5", 110-115 pounds. The youngest & smallest player.
- She is a natural redhead (orange actually), with emerald green eyes. Also
- is fair of skin with some freckles (a sexy smattering across her nose & her
- breasts). She is alluring. Petite, but fiery. She likes loud music, cars and
- (loud) sex. She works for the local newspaper where she lives as a photo-
- grapher. She has a B.A. in Journalism. Her smile is sexy, demure, and
- inticing all at the same time.
- (Details: 34d-20-34, bisexual and switches easily from men to women as her
- mood dictates. She is very oral, and she also one of those women who "let go"
- and thrash about. She has a beautifully striking orange triangle between
- her legs, but her labia are shaved regularly. She is a dirty talker in bed
- and will do (almost) anything for her partner's (and her own) sexual pleasure.
- She and the W#1 have never been to bed together and don't know the other
- is bisexual. Favorite position: Anything with deep penetration. Favorite
- act: Giving head while getting some from her girlfriend.)
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- *Whew*
- Ok boys & girls, our job is to write a story that puts this foursome into
- contact, doing as many things as "realistically possible" in a 3-4 day week-
- end. No B&D or S&M flings (explain all that stuff showing up on the airport
- baggage x-ray machine!) They need to meet naturally and build on it from
- there.
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- Some Ideas to consider:
- 3 of us writing a story could get quite long. We could write this as either
- 2, 3, or 4 shorter stories, each telling a different viewpoint. (I.E. The
- two guys telling their stories to the reader, and the two gals, or each of
- the people individually. This might make it feel realistic (but you have to
- re-write the dull parts too!)
- A 50-50 split probably would work best, where the gals tell their story,
- and the guys tell their version (could be fun).
- We can also consider writing in 3rd-person (like many novels do) as though
- we're actually telling the story of all four people...
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- We need to know who does what, with whom, how, for how long, etc. We need
- some continuity. Let me start off the rest of the plot outline and see who
- makes what suggestions:
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- Day 1:
- The guys and gals check in to the "club", getting 3 bungalows between
- them (1 for each guy, the gals saved money by sharing a room). The "club"
- will host dinner and dancing the first night (on the house), so people can
- meet and have a good time. Our boys & girls dance with other people but
- as the evening wears on, they pair up at a table until they wander outside
- and down the beach for a stroll. One couple wanders down the beach while
- the other couple sits and talks. The wandering pair find seclusion and
- go do it, the sitting couple kissing and "making out" on the beach.
- They re-meet on the beach, go back to their rooms (paired up) and spend
- the night !!!!ing each other.
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- Day 2: They meet for breakfast and go on a shopping trip into town and...
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- Day 3: ????
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- Day 4: ????? !
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- The island: Is, of course, tourist supported. Our folks don't find any
- trouble (crime etc) during their stay. There are nice places to eat, and
- there are "glitzy" tourist places to eat (our pilot can really pick the
- good spots for food!). There are nightclubs that are fancy-dress types,
- and there are plenty of strip-joints (full nudity permitted, some even
- have live-sex acts), and of course the "club" puts on shows of its own
- (Ahem...rated PG-13 for obvious reasons). The village(s) on the island
- have fancy "big name" shops, and thousands of small shops and open stands
- with goods ranging from top quality to shoddy. The road are paved (mostly)
- and there are plenty of secluded areas on the island to get away from it
- all. You can rent boats, cars, motorscooters, planes, hang-gliders, scuba
- gear, etc etc.
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- Now...Let's have some FUN!
- P.B.
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