Transcription: Revision is probably the most important step of all, but unfortunately it's often the most neglected. Parents and teachers can work together to help children recognize that writing is a process. A first draft can be changed and played with until it says exactly what you want it to say. Maybe the ending can become a beginning, or maybe not. Computers have given us a powerful new way to make rewriting painless and to help children improve their riding.
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