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- From: eliz@ai.mit.edu (Elizabeth Willey)
- Subject: Re: *** Why is rewriting bad ?/It ain't
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- Date: Thu, 21 Jan 1993 02:54:52 GMT
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- I know a very successful, intelligent, popular author who rewrites
- everything until it is right. This is what he does:
-
- 1. Draft with scraps of paper, clippings, pictures, sketches, etc.,
- in a notebook which becomes a living, ongoing major resource.
-
- 2. Draft story with computer word-processing program.
-
- 3. Copy and rewrite first draft with typewriter.
-
- 4. Copy and rewrite typewritten draft with word-processor.
-
- 5. Repeat 3 and 4 until satisfied.
-
- His contention is that typing at the computer is great for fast work
- and that the more painstaking labor of typing on a Selectric focuses
- the writer's attention sharply on each word. And, when writing, it is
- well to remember that each word counts in the building of the story,
- no matter how long or short it is. Spelling and grammatical errors
- tend to be corrected in the computer passes; word-choice, character,
- descriptions, and plot work in the typewritten. This seems like a
- fine way to work, and the quality of his writing is a testimonial to
- the effectiveness of rewriting and improving one's prose until it is
- not merely satisfactory, but the best one is capable of producing.
-
- For technical (descriptive) and letter-writing, which are far more
- focused and task-driven than fiction writing, it is probably easier to
- get it right in the first draft. Still, the quality of much of the
- writing in handbooks and on business correspondence is so bad that
- clearly there are very few who can get it right on the first, or even
- the second, pass.
-
-
- Elizabeth Willey
-
- [And for my own practice, I write and rewrite until I come as close to
- BEST as I can. I'd hate to put my name on something I wasn't proud of
- having written.]
-